I don’t see what’s so bad about the video. Sure not the best production, a couple typos in the post-production. Certainly not bad enough to bag on it.
I wonder how many instructional videos OP has made and posted for the public? As someone who has done so, it’s not as easy as it looks. Everyone starts somewhere.
I think this whole thread should be taken down for mean-spiritedness, pettiness, and providing nothing of value.