Hi @Retta75,
Great to see you putting yourself out there and having a go.
There were some mistakes throughout the song, fret buzz, timing, a couple of missed notes etc.
The biggest thing i noticed IMO was the way you pluck the strings, i think if you practice on not trying to smash the strings this will clean your playing up heaps.
I used to do the same thing, and over time i really focused on letting the bass talk on its own rather than trying to make it scream.
I know this will help you improve your playing,
Cheers Brian
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